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She said her boss that she would be unable to come to work the following day because her car had broken down.

In my meaning there should ideally be a gap between school and university so that young people can see something of life.

If you have got that job, would you have been able to move to a new house?

If you want an advice on that topic I suggest you go to the local Advice Bureau.

Dave is so carried on with it all that he's put the baby's name down for a very expensive private boys' school.

The manager was very angry with her and she made an oath to herself that it wouldn't happen again.

The boss of the factory liked her and offered her the job straightforward.

B: I see what you mean. I suppose now you mention it, he's tied to break the speed limit many times.

I delayed to write my letter to her because I didn't know in all honesty what to say.

When their dog got really old and couldn't move very much, it will sit in the sunshine all day.